[ Custom Character ] Byakuran Minora

[Bya Minora]

Byakuran Minora::Kiraz (( Sucessor of Kira ))
call me by my Display name, 1 - 2 years ... ...

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NStandard Data ◊

The birth certificate reads Byakuran Minora
But You Better Call Me Successor of Kira (( Later On ))
I've Seen the World For 16 years
As I've Been Around Since 1996
Making Myself Known As Student
I Classify As a Male Human


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NMirror, Mirror ◊

Byakuran has blue Hair that covers his left eye he has Redish Pink Eyes but thats because he wears contacts,

He wears a black shirt that covers his whole upper body he also wears Blue Jeans and wears normal white shoes.



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N What I've Done ◊

Byakuran was born into a rich family fortunatly he got everything he wanted and for that he has learned to not except losing so he goes all out when he finds something his intrested in,

Nothing bad happened to Byakuran his Parents died from old age and Byakuran Inherited the Family's riches Byakuran never used it on much only things he really got into to he has a waitor, maids, assistants etc But the closest person he ever got near was his Waitor Shinjo,

Byakuran looked at Shinjo as a father and Shinjo looks at him as a Son But one day Byakuran finds something very interesting. He found on the news that Kira was killing criminals from heart attacks. He smiled and got working on it.



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N Take a Look ◊

Byakuran's personality is very complex he does not care for his money he only cares about what he does with his Life,

Byakuran is the sort of person who does not like to lose to anyone and is very stubborn about it he loves having to force himself to he edge to win. He also loves lollies i mean who doesn't?



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N Just Move ◊

Can't beat me at His Wits, Instincts, Personality, Thinking through until the end.
Though you may win at Speed, Eating Quickly, Staring Contests and Fashion.
I Like lollies, Winning, Finding something Fun, Shinjo and Books.
I Don't Like Losing, Running and Annoying People.
Keep Away Losing.

Abilities Thinking things Through Until the End
Weapons Feet and Fists.
Alliance Kira
Extra ---



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N Show and Tell ◊

roleplay sample

(( First Appearance ))

I was on my computer completing a very interesting case until i turned on the T.V I turned on Sakura T.V I Heard he news that criminals are dieing from heart attacks I smiled " This will be very interesting Kira.. " I asked Shinjo to come in " Shinjo please bring up a cup of my favourite Tea and some lollies thank you " I jumped on my bed " My next game is you Kira... , "

I smirked as i saw Shinjo walk in with my Tea and lollies " Thank you Shinjo " I jumped off my bed as Shinjo left my Tea and lollies on a desk " Tell my Assistances to cancel all plans for the next 5 - 7 months " Shinjo bowed and walked out " Kira... L ... You are both very interesting to me "

(( Thats all i got hope its enough xD ))

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[Yagami Raito]

To answer the question you posted in the cbox: No. We are currently a canon rpg, so Yagami Raito would not have a successor. As well, he reaches the point where he becomes far too arrogant to really consider something like that. He likely wouldn't trust anyone with such a position unless he became very, very close to them, anyway.

Plus, if I were to allow my character a successor if I wished to stray from the canon plot, I'd need someone on my role-playing level. Your application at this time does not even meet the basic requirements we have here.

We also require realism. The contacts would be fine, but blue hair? Not unless it had been dyed that way would it be accepted. Your role-play sample is in first person, with several grammatical errors and a spelling mistake here and there.

[Bya Minora]

Ouch straight forward well i think i have some arguments firstly when i created this Bio it was kind of late but besides that this is a draft so yeah also what if this happened would you still be so arrogant?

What if i walked to Raito's house You Answer and i said I am a Police Officer and asked to speak to you privatly:

If you agreed I would of told you to step outside I'll show you a badge with a fake name. I think you would've answered my questions and then when wait a couple of days then write my name down same thing as the F B I agent so you wouldn't look suspicous but what if I said directly to you " I know you are Kira and I'll like to be Your successor For when you die " You would say No Or something that insists that you are not Kira I would say " What of the Possibilites L wins putting me into the group decreases the percentage of that happening " (( That is for you to respond ))

If you didn't Agree: I would've showed you my badge and you proberly had to or you would've been arrested for being Kira I would've threatened.

(( My grammar is pretty bad i agree with you but I am fairly young so yeah it ain't that much of a surprise to me also yes he dyed his hair blue ))

[Yagami Raito]

Then you should have posted it as incomplete. And of course I'm here to be straight-forward, I'm reviewing your application. Anything aside from bluntness would be a failure on my part to act as admin.

That wouldn't happen. We have a note about realism on this site, so your character is not allowed to know who Kira or L is, or anything at all that you would know as a reader or viewer. Your character would know just as much as any normal police officer or FBI agent. Not even the people working on the task force or L know who Kira is.

And age nor speaking another language is an excuse here. We're semi-literate, meaning we expect decent grammar and spelling, and posts long enough to provide some detail. No excuse would make any difference there, as if your posts continued to fail to be up to par, we would delete them.