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Post by Shinigami King on Feb 7, 2009 12:39:59 GMT -5
CHARACTERNAME:: is presented by
YourName, who's been roleplaying for Time Roleplaying pickyears/months and is age years old. YourName also plays list-other-characters-here.
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NStandard Data ◊
The birth certificate reads full character name
But You Better Call Me nicknames/aliases
I've Seen the World For agehere years
As I've Been Around Since birthdate (day and month only)
Making Myself Known As occupation (if applicable. Student also applies)
I Classify As a gender human or shinigami?
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NMirror, Mirror ◊
place at least two paragraphs worth of appearance
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N What I've Done ◊
place at least two paragraphs worth of history
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N Take a Look ◊
at least two well-thought out paragraphs of personality
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N Just Move ◊
Can't beat me at strengths
Though you may win at weaknesses
I Like likes
I Don't dislikes
Keep Away Fears
Abilities abilities
Weapons modern only, please, and be sensible
Alliance Kira, KSIU (L), Neutral, etc...
Extra anything else you wish to place
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N Show and Tell ◊
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Post by Amane Misa on Feb 7, 2009 17:24:01 GMT -5
--Thread moved to appropriate board--
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Post by Yagami Raito on Feb 7, 2009 21:37:00 GMT -5
I'm sorry, but this application does not follow our application guide, and because there is so little information based on the Shinigami King, I would have liked to have seen more speculation about his history, his appearance, and a well-constructed personality section to make up for the lack of description that is otherwise available for him. As well, there are many spelling errors and typos scattered throughout your role-play sample, so therefore I will be denying it, as it does not meet our expectations at this time.
You are most welcome to re-submit, providing you use our template and add more information. I'm actually quite pleased with the potential displayed here, so please don't let this keep your from attempting again if you wish ^^
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Post by Shinigami King on Feb 8, 2009 2:53:40 GMT -5
can you give me a base for what im supposed to type? like something i can fill in? im sotrry this RP site is differant from what i usually do. and didnt i describe his appearance? and showed ti to you in my sig?
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Post by Yagami Raito on Feb 8, 2009 18:15:18 GMT -5
First, copy and paste the character template provided here(click), then fill in the information between the coding and such. Follow it exactly. Because your character doesn't have much information available you'll have to be creative in other ways to make up for that. I also suggest your read the rules, as your roleplay sample leads me to believe that you did not. If you are still confused, PM a staff member (myself, Misa, or L) for more information, or check out the accepted applications to see what other members have done. |
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