Pandora

[pandora]

Your Username:Pandora (what we call you in OOC)
Age:14 (your age)
Other Characters:none. (any other characters that you have on this site?)


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Full Name:Reiko Aziyu
Aliases:Pandora
Gender:Female.
Age:14
Birthdate:July 19 (month and day)
Occupation:Student (only if applicable. This includes such things as 'student')
Race:Human (human or shinigami?)

Appearance:Well,(I hope its okay if I refer to her in the third person.)She's short in height,has big brown eyes,short,shaggy black hair.She always has hair in her face.She is not pale but not tan either.She is about average in weight as well.
She wears mostly pants and a shirt.Occational(sp?)dress but it is very unlikely.
(Please put at least two paragraphs)

History:Was raised in a caing environment until her mother died.Lived in a foster home.Always got close to people who ended up leaving her alone.Never really got along with people well.Spent most of her time in parks or in a library.

Was never very social so she never actually had friends,enemies or any worry of the worlds thoughts.School seems to be her only place of peace.She use to hang around orphanages.

(Please put at least two paragraphs)

Personality:She is a timid and sensitive girl.She is annoyingly appologetic.Always wants to have someone to please.Very cold to people that she doesn't know.She hold people she knows close and dear to her.
She has a strong dislike of the world but wants to be apart of it.She gets very emotional randomly.Never is happy for more than a minuet.
(Please put at least two well thought-out paragraphs)


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Strengths:Brains
Weaknesses:People,Love,Caring.
Likes:anmals,reading,outdoors and music.
Dislikes:some people
Fears:losing loved ones

Abilities:To be able to tell if persons lying.
(Anything your character is particularly good at?)

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Weapons:none
(no...not like a samurai sword. As in guns and knives and modern things. This applies particularly to those of the Task Force)

Alliance:Neutral (Kira, Police, Neutral...etc)

Extra:no nothing else. (Anything else about your character you wish to place)

Roleplay Sample:She sat on the park bench with a blank look on her face.Finally away from it all.she thought then let out a a soft sigh."It's so peaceful here....to bad peace never lasts." (Provide a roleplay sample using a humanoid, but put it in quote using these tags [ quote ] text here [ / quote ] remember to remove spaces)

[Yagami Raito]

I'm not sure if this is complete or not, but your appearance, history, and personality sections simply don't meet what is stated as requirements. Each of them needs more.

Your roleplay sample also isn't acceptable here. This is semi-literate, meaning it's a para-rpg, where most of our members can make more than the required 125 words per post.