Mimi

[mimi]

Mimi:: is presented by
Mimi, who's been roleplaying for 4 1/2 years and is --- years old.

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NStandard Data ◊

The birth certificate reads Mimi Akani Ushina
But You Better Call Me Mimi
I've Seen the World For 18 years
As I've Been Around Since October, 30'th
Making Myself Known As an Artist and Cop
I Classify As a Human



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NMirror, Mirror ◊

Mimi : Long black hair with purple streaks and tips. Probally a DD cup, abit to skinny. Also short for her age, she uses that to her advantage though. She has dark brown eyes that look black.

If you look at her for while she looks, pretty fit, healthy, short. She looks pretty good to the eye. But if you actually stare into her eyes long enough they seem like a pit of darkness... death almost. But that goes away when you get to know her better. A scar on her left arm that goes from her elbow to her shoulder.

She usually wears a black tank top with red cargo pants, when its warm or hot out. When its colder out she usually wears a red coat or sweater with a black T-shirt under. And just some longer legged pants.



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N What I've Done ◊

After Akari's mom died, when she was born, her dad beat her. She'd tried to run away before, when she was about 13, but she ran into some guy. At first she thought hed help her, but he wanted something in return that she wasn't willing to give. So she was forced to go back home or get raped by some freak.

She did return home safetly, but with a scar on her left arm. After that she figured out life wasn't gonna change, or atleats that what she thought. He father died and her brother, Cam, took her in, he was a cop she wasn'ted to follow in his footsteps, and she has.

After that things got better, but one day they were alking home, taking a shortcut through an alley, her brother saw a wanted criminal, Rasui, mumbling to himself. He crept closer and closer.... ' BANG! ' a gun shot a scream and the sound of someone running off yelling, "THEY WONT CATCH ME!".

Her brother lay dead infornt her and she sat on the cold ground, she crawled closer and reached into his pocket grabbing his phone dialing ' 911 '. They came in no time, there was an ambulance aswell. But they were to late, the criminal was only about 16 at the time Akari only 14.

Ever sinse she swore she'd kill him slowly and painfully just like he did to her brother. She still keeps that promise to this day. She goes after all criminals now, to save others from experiencing what she had that day.



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N Take a Look ◊

Akari is not an open perosn or a nice one at that. Atleast not when you first meet her. She can be the coldest and harshest at points, but also the kindest. She does have a heart even if it doesn't seem it but if you look deep enough and close enough you'll find it.

Once you get colse to her she is a kind hearted person, she always keeps a calm emotionless expression... usually. She has a soft spot for animals which isn't a good or bad thing. She will do anything to help a friend. And anything to stop a killer or any other type of criminal. She 's also a person that always keps her promises.



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N Just Move ◊

Can't beat me at drawing, and shooting.
Though you may win at showing mercy and making friends.
I Like L, Fast Thinkers, Kids, Water.
I Don't Kira, Criminals, Killers, Fire.
Keep Away Fire

Abilities Shes a great artist, and a good shooter.
Weapons She carries a gun.
Alliance L
Extra She has a pet squirell named Cam, after her dead brother.



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N Show and Tell ◊

Mimi sat on her bed her laptop out checking out some sites. She'd searched Kira and found fan sites. She growled her eyes narrowing. she shut her laptop, "They shouldn't worship a creep like Kira!"she snapped to herself. She layed back on the bed and sighed putting her hands behind her head.

"There has got to be a way to find out who Kira is..."she mumbled "Hope L has more louck than the rest of us..."she said closing her eyes. She looked out her open window and a squirell climbed in onto her bed and layed beside her. "Night Cam..."she mumbled to it turnign off ehr lamp and falling asleep.

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[L]

Alright, I'm sorry but I can't approve you just yet.

Firstly, you have 'L' in your character's "Likes" and 'Kira' in her "Dislikes". Could you please add a little to your history to say that she found out about them and explain why and how she likes L and doesn't like Kira? This way it looks kind of... unfounded.

Secondly, she's a bit too young to be a cop. I mean, she'd have to be at least 20 (preferably 22 and up) for something like that to work. After all, to be a member of the police you have to attend the academy or something in the likes, which is done *after* you're 18. xD

Then, please add a little more to her personality. With a past like that, she's bound to be a little more complex, and besides this is the most important section of the application, and also the shortest in yours. And the role-play sample is also under the minimum word limi9t for this site, which is 125.

I'd also like to note that her name says "Mimi Akani Ushina", with an 'n', but throughout the rest of the application, you call her "Akari", with an 'r'. Also, you might like to proofread, as this looks like it was written very quickly, words and letters are missing in places, and it's difficult to read that way.

Thank you.